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I want to hear what you guys have to say about my best stories.

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In my opinion, those are the best of the bunch, stories that are longer, have more effort put into them, or I just am more proud of than my normal stuff all in all.

But of course, they aren't perfect by a long shot, I'm still a mediocre writer at best, and though I am trying to include more dialog and the occasional thought bubble I know there is still a LOT of room for improvement.

So, if anyone has some constructive criticism feel free to let me hear it. Anything from word choice, to analogies, to formatting, to plot, anything and everything, let me hear it.

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TG-Vocals Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
I would like to see a story where the transformation isn't the focus, but instead the plot is.
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Explicit-Cryptid Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
yeah I've been trying to think of a story like that, problem is, I'd need a good plot for it
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TG-Vocals Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Anything goes. Just think of something simple and try to work off of it.
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Explicit-Cryptid Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
that's fair, I've been trying to think of a more plot orientated story for awhile, I have a few ideas but most are just eh
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